Summer of Math Exposition

Very good

This is a creative format, and I could tell you are enthusiastic about math from the music, so I encourage you to keep trying. Here’s my feedback: The text kept disappearing before I could finish reading it, and sometimes the cursive was hard for me to read, which made it hard for me to understand the video. The bits where you were just erasing the whiteboard were unnecessary, and from 0:59 to 1:05 it is just a blank whiteboard The music became way too distracting from 1:50 to 2:30 I think the biggest problem with the content was that you didn’t go through and explain each step of the process, you just wrote down the steps, which doesn’t explain it well.

Looks interesting but probably above my head and too fast. Nice music.

Very fun! Maybe work on your handwriting a bit? And use less intense music

Interesting presentation! What’s cool is that I actually encountered this problem recently in trying to figure out estimates for the error in solving matrix inversion using Newton’s method. The necessary increment would be the square of the previous one, and I got a product just like that and saw it rolled out to be a geometric series. Anyway, I definitely liked the video for its artistic aspects and sort of the narrative. The music had a good way of increasing the tension. But I can’t honestly say how well I would have understood it if I hadn’t already been going in with a recent memory of this fact. I’m not a big fan of frenetic pace and sped up hand movements in general, which might be distracting for anxious people like myself. But in general as educational/inspirational art, this is definitely some good fun.