Summer of Math Exposition

You choose a very interesting topic, that I have barely heard of before. I just wish that you went into so much more detail. You did a great job at introducing the subject and making me want to explore more. One small critique is that the video is very fast-paced, and as I didn't have any previous experience, I occasionally had to rewind the video. Great job :)

One could follow the video, although when someone never heard of Graham's Number, it would be difficult to follow due to the rapid speed of the explanations. This should not be a personal attack to the creator, but the explanation was really difficult to understand sometimes because they muffled certain words or talked so fast that words got lost mid sentence. This is fine on its own, but when explaining a complicated math topic, you'd rather go slow and pronounce the words clearly rather than going fast. For non-native speakers, that could be a strong turn down because they can't follow. Thank you!

Your visuals were definetely allright for this competition, but you can work much more on how you use your voice. Get close to the mic. Speak louder than you think you need to and take looooong pauses in between to let your good points fester in the viewers mind.

Interesting topic, poor presentation. Quality improvements to the mic, or even just slowing down whilst speaking to let the listener digest what has been said would my increase score substantially.