Summer of Math Exposition

It doesn't seem like a vulgarization video, but more like a project update. It's hard to understand what you're talking about just with this video, which doesn't seem to me to be in the spirit of the competition. What you're talking about seems interesting, tho, and I would be sure to check out the full series on your channel to learn more

Although the topic of the video is interesting, there is no introduction; there are allusions to previous unwatched videos without proper referencing. It is very difficult to follow. Additionally, the creator doesn't really market or deliver himself well by downplaying his previous attempts and videos.

Love the classic style, but the voice and the colors make it a bit boring. You don't need to animate too much, but add some highlight on what you are talking about so the video is more active.